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tribute to tim burton by ~pleur-de-lys:iconpleur-de-lys:





I would like to be Vincent Malloy
With a grim face and a zombie dog
Would like to be dreaming
Wandering in the fog
Nobody around me
I like to be alone
Nobody disturbs me
I could change them in stone

If only I were Vincent Malloy
With Vincent price deep voice
Walking among the grave
And quoting Allan Poe
Thinking it’s my last eve
Nobody seems to know
But why should I worry?
For list is just nothing
And I want more of death
It is the real deal

I wish I were Vincent Malloy
With zombie dog and living doll
Nobody’s beside me
My love have been buried
I’m searching for her under the mournful grind
I’m searching for fear inside my so dark dreams
I’ll never get back from this freaky travel
When nightmares are too dark
There is no more marvel

I would like to be Vincent Malloy
For he had a wax museum
Playing with death
Instead of toy
With his own truth
And his own laws
He was an amazing person

I would have liked to meet Vincent Malloy
Telling him not to trick with ghouls
It is a game for mindless fools
And warning him against morbid
For it can only lead to scream
Telling him
As his mother said
Go outside and play
It’s a beautiful day

I would have liked to be Vincent Malloy
Would have liked too feel like this crazy boy
Living in his own universe
Talking only in verse
But his soul is now a jail
And his dreams are like chains
Vincent died instead of playing
And he cried instead of laughing
It’s sunny outside
And a beautiful day
If you want to be dark
There is a price to pay
©2004-2009 ~pleur-de-lys
:iconpleur-de-lys:

Author's Comments

this poem has been inspired by tim burton "Vincent", i say my feeling about his story...
i think you should read the original poem before mine
[link]
it is not a very good poem, it looks like it has been written by a child...but i really like tim burton vincent's, so i wanted to have one too...^^
i think i'm going to do an other version of this poem, a shorter one, by cutting all the crappy sentences of this version...°_°

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:iconpla2:
Vincent Malloy, Vincent Malloy,
Is being alive just a decoy
To trap the shadows and net your soul
To get that bride out of that hole!

Now please mind your head,
For playing god with the dead
Is a game that few survive

They wax as you die
They stand as you lie
and laugh as they eat your soul



Yay! my first attempt at (rubbish) poetry
vive tim burton
et bela lugosi
:iconpleur-de-lys:
hey!!! don't think it's rubbish poetry!!! i love it...
why don't you post it...?!!!
really!
a lot better than mine...!

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"toujours à mes cotés s'agite le démon" C.B.
:iconauralay:
Ooooo, I love it!

Tim Burton is a genius! :worships him:

Too bad my brain is drained from all the math homework to really think about it ^^;
:iconpleur-de-lys:
lol...^^
:hug:

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"toujours à mes cotés s'agite le démon" C.B.
:iconauralay:
^_^ :hugs: Keep writing ^_^ (just not in french, cuz then I can't read it, lol. Maybe I should've taken french instead of spanish. Haha)
:icondarkminttea:
Coucou chuis tombée sur ton oeuvre en cherchant des trucs sur Tim Burton...Elle me semble étrangement familière, c'est trop bizarre. T'aurais pas fait de l'art plastique au lycée Charles Peguy ??? Chuis trop curieuse répond moi siteplé lol ^_^

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:butterflytwo: [s i n c e i w a s b o r n i s t a r t e d t o d e c a y] :butterflytwo:
:iconpleur-de-lys:
loool
non non, pas d'art plastique dans le lycée dont tu parles...
sinon ben je suppose qu'elle te parait familière parceque ca suit plutot la trame du court métrage, mais c'est pas un texte que j'ai copié ou que ce soit...

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"toujours à mes cotés s'agite le démon" C.B.
:icondarkminttea:
C'est incroyable!! Je suis pourtant sure de l'avoir déjà vu. A mon avis quelqu'un a du copier ton travail qui d'ailleurs est magnifique!! ^___^

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:butterflytwo: [s i n c e i w a s b o r n i s t a r t e d t o d e c a y] :butterflytwo:
:iconpleur-de-lys:
merde...!
tu crois vraiment que quelqun aurait pu le copier...?!!!!
raaaaaaa...!!!!!!!!
dingue !

merci du compliment en tous cas...!

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"toujours à mes cotés s'agite le démon" C.B.

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